Know what i really want?
to show this short story to someone who is in a position to tell me how bad or good it is
have them criticize, tell me the structure is perfect, the anticipation is build up well, the opening line could be better? and so on,so forth!
and instead! it stays quiet in some folder,patiently waiting, churning its sorry words in just my head over and over, edited,full stopped and with more exclaimation points!
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